February 23, 2015
Dover Beach Extension
Mrs. Phelps and Mrs. Bowles walked home together. Mrs. Phelps still had tears streaming down her face. " Now why are you still crying?" Mrs. Bowles exclaimed, She continued her rant -" I can't believe Montag had the nerve to read that poem to us. You know what I think ...I should turn that man in! It is unacceptable. "NO!" Mrs.. Phelps shouted as they walked up to Mrs. Bowles house. " Think about that poem, doesn't it make you sad. I feel empty like I'm mourning something but I don't know what! Is it happiness? Suddenly I'm not happy anymore, I have been thinking I don't think I have been happy for a long time." Mrs. Phelps desperately explained. " Hmmm... I'm happy I don't feel any different. See you later" Mrs. Bowles said walking into her house.
Mrs. Phelps turns back around wanting to see Montag maybe he will read more to her. Something inside her snapped and she needed answers. Banging on Montag's door, he answered with a scowl on his face and before he could say anything Mrs. Phelps told him she wanted to hear more... she needed to read the books.
I see many similarities between my story and yours. I like how Mrs. Phelps' point of view changes.
ReplyDeleteThis is so cute but a tear jerker lol. Love this Em.
ReplyDeleteI like how the characters in your story was portrayed very similar to the one in the book. I also like the part at the end where Mrs. Phelps needed to read books! It was great!
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